Hey!
I'll have to agree with Thyking here, but I'll just add a bit more to what I think as well...
First off, your application. I can see that you took in some advice from your first application, there is a little bit more effort and substance however, I feel like you could rephrase some sentences, and proofread before posting. It may just be me being nitty-gritty but it gives me the impression of little effort made if you didn't take that time to polish up and make your application the best it could be. A little more detail into Why you deserve the rank would be nice to see as well.
Next, your activity:
Your game time of 1 week 1 day 18 hours with no warns is very good! However, your forum and discord presence could be improved. Most of your forum posts are applications and I'm not quite sure if you're even on the discord. One of the prerequisites for Trusted is "You must be well known within our community", I think I've seen you once or twice but never interacted with you and I'm not sure how prominent you are within the server.
Tips to improve!
- Interact more with the community and make yourself well known; this could be achieved by replying to questions on OOC, roleplaying as PD, or socialising with people on main street!
- Read the previous successful applications for trusted and take in aspects of what made them successful and add them into yours (obviously do not blindly copy their responses)
I'd have to leave a -1 unfortunately, but good luck with your application!