Dexter

(To keep fairness, I tend to not leave feedback at the moment due to my current inactivity; however, I feel my feedback in this instance is valid.) Over 1 week ago you were warned and muted for racism - something that doesn't require familiarity with the rules, but just basic common sense. Main reason I left a comment though, was because of your harsh [deleted] response to @thyking . This, and your inability to refrain from racist remarks, speaks massive immaturity and an inability to keep your composure, and shows you are clearly not ready for the role of Trusted. I suggest working on yourself to better your level of maturity and respect, as well as additionally improving on your low level of discord and forum activity. -1.

Can someone please explain to me why we just don't whitelist more actual props that are commonly used through this method, instead of having to spawn it in as a wire_button? The wire_button method is quite tedious...

Major +1 I think you'll all find that alot of PD members (I may or may not be included in doing this ) just don't respond to and completely ignore hostage scenarios because of this specific reason - no one wants to fork out 20k (or just any sum of money) for the sake of 5 minutes of 'mediocre' roleplay. I agree that the hostage/negotiation scenario needs due attention/change.

Maybe use a more neutral term instead. Give her an ol' rub and say "Good Pussy"

BedBananas. He's one of the few Youtubers I've found out there that keeps the quality of his content consistently high and amusing (in my opinion of course)

In primary school (7 or 8 years old I think) I was standing on the very top of the playground tower, when a girl ran up to me and pulled my pants down exposing my then favourite pair of Spiderman underwear I really liked Spiderman

Minimum game-time requirement not met.

Hey Xavier, I'm going to try and keep this short, mainly because I left feedback for your last Trusted application only 1 week ago. You've put alot more effort and detail into your app this time, and you have increased your activity in the discord and in-game - however, my response still stays the same. Your warns are far too recent, you haven't increased your activity on the forums, I still don't think you are very well-known within the community, and I feel not enough time has passed in order for you to have actually incorporated the changes I suggested to you. I recommend you read over my comment from your last application again, as I am confident in saying that the feedback and suggestions I provided to you then still apply to you now. Once again, I'm leaving a -1. My comment from your last Trusted application: Link: (https://forums.orbitalservers.gg/threads/xavier-trusted-role-application.945/post-5942)

Hey Beanboi, First of all, 3 warns for 1 weeks worth of game-time is an okay amount, it's acceptable. Also, It's nice to see a Trusted application with a decent amount of game-time, as it shows you're not trying to rush to the rank and are dedicated towards the server. However, I feel there are a few aspects you don't meet when it comes to being fit for the rank of Trusted, and they are: 1. Your activity. I'm mainly referring to your activity out of the game - a.k.a. the discord and the forums. You have a decent amount of activity on the discord but, you haven't really said anything for almost a month. Additionally, despite signing up to the forums in August, your only activity is for a Trusted application - not good. 2. Your community presence. Being well-known within the community is really important for Trusted, and I don't really know you. I think I've seen your name in game maybe once or twice, but I don't think we have ever interacted? 3. Your application. Your application is very low effort, and you haven't put alot of detail nor any thought into it. You also talk about the wrong things. To be honest, I feel like your application is taking the piss? You're not going to get Trusted by sucking up/simping to staff members. Additionally, as much as Trusted is about helping other players, it's not about 'giving new players money' or 'giving rats glitter'. Your 'playful' and lack of seriousness approach to your application shows that you don't care about the true meaning of what it means to be Trusted. My suggestions as to where you can improve: 1. Increase your activity. Mainly on the discord and forums. I suggest getting back into being active in the discord, such as by joining in on conversations occurring in 'general'. I also suggest you start using the forums. A great place to start is by joining in on conversations in the 'Discussions' tab, but if you really want to work towards getting Trusted, you should try and provide feedback on peoples suggestions/applications. 2. Become more well-known within the community. People need to know you in order to trust you. A great way to increase your community involvement is to try different roles that get you interacting with people (such as PD), helping out other players (such as answering questions in OOC, teaching people how to play specific roles, helping people become familiar with the rules and community etc.), and by making an effort to socialize and meet people within the community. 3. Work on your application. You need to put alot more effort, detail and words into your application. You also need to change the priorities of what you talk about. I suggest talking more about what you have done to contribute to/assist the community, and how with the rank of Trusted you will be able to be seen as a more reliable and trustworthy source, allowing you to help out even more. Conclusion: I don't think you meet the prerequisites required for Trusted, nor do I think you are taking your application seriously. I suggest you take what I said above as constructive and helpful feedback, and use my suggestions to improve upon yourself to hopefully gain the rank of Trusted in future time. I'm going to leave a confident -1. Personal note: Word count: 565 words

"the best builder in DarkRP history" Who decided on that 'title', you yourself? lmao

Hey Jeffrey, First off, only 1 warn for 2 days game-time is good, so try and keep it at just one. Also, you've clearly put alot of effort into your application (and as someone who frequents Trusted applications), this is a sight for sore eyes. However, I don't think you meet the prerequisites or qualities needed for the rank of Trusted. I will explain below what you lack, as well as provide suggestions as to where you can improve. 1. Your activity. As much as you do meet the 2 days required game-time in order to apply for Trusted, please take note that this is just a minimum put in place to avoid a clutter of Trusted applications from extremely new players. You only just scrape by the required amount by 2 minutes, so you were awfully quick to apply - this feels like you were rushing to get that game-time. Personally, I believe 2 days isn't enough time in order to become familiar with the rules and become well-known within the community. Additionally, activity outside of the game is important as well. I couldn't find you in the discord, and you only signed up to the forums yesterday to apply for Trusted. I recognize you state you only found the forums recently, but because you realize activity on the forums is important for Trusted, I feel you could have put some work into being active on the forums before rushing into a Trusted application. 2. Your community presence. In all honestly, I don't know you. I think I recall seeing your name in game once or twice, but we have never interacted? Being well-known within the community is really important for Trusted. People need to know you in order to find you reliable and trustworthy. 3. Your application. Again, I want to say well done on your application, you definitely put alot of thought and effort into it. However, I'm feeling a bit, mixed towards it. You've put quite a few unnecessary statements, and I feel like you also miss a bit of the point as to what Trusted is for. You mention twice that with the rank of Trusted, you'll provide "...links to tutorials...", and that "In essence, i will aim to improve the facilities of the PD...". Please take note that most people who need assistance don't need 'links to tutorials', but need more of an answer to a question that they have asked (usually about the rules). People don't need links, but more of a person who is familiar with the rules and can be a trustworthy source of information. Also, Trusted is about helping the greater community, not just providing help to specific RP roles (in your case, the PD). I feel like you should have expanded more on how you can actually help the greater community with Trusted. 4. Your warn. I don't usually comment on warns unless it's a large amount, but one thing I need to point out is your excuse as to why you gained the warn. I doubt it was because you 'didn't advert /crossfire', because you killed one person without RP reasons, and attempted to kill another person without RP reasons. That's two people. This doesn't sound like a simple crossfire situation, and I doubt the warn could have been avoided had you actually advertised crossfire. My suggestions as to where you can improve: 1. Increase your activity. You should not increase your activity in game, as this way you will become even more familiar with the rules, and most importantly, the community. You should also increase your activity out of game as well. I suggest you join in the discords, and start getting involved with the conversations that occur in them (the 'general' chat is a great place to start). Also, you should increase your forum activity. I recognize you state you are a bit shy in regards to this, so I recommend you start small. Join in on the more general side of conversations on the forums in the 'Discussions' tab. And, if you're up to it, provide feedback on suggestions/applications as well. Start small with that as well (Don't go crazy like me). Just leave a simple +1/-1 and explain in one or two sentences as to why you made that choice. 2. Become more well-known within the community. Being well known is really important for Trusted. Again, people need to know you in order to trust you. A great way to do this is not just by increasing your activity in the ways I stated above, but by also: a) Trying out more roles. It seems you care alot for the PD, maybe try getting to know the side of the community that cares more for the "criminal side" of role-play. Try teaming up with thieves or gangs, sell guns as a dealer, or make yourself for hire as a battle medic. Try and get yourself out there and become known for playing a diverse amount of roles. b) Help out other people. People always need help - both new and old players. A great way to do this is to answer questions in OOC, teach people new roles/jobs/commands, explain rules they might not be familiar with etc. etc. Basically, help out the community. c) Make an effort to socialize and meet new people. Join in and become apart of the community. Start or jump into conversations with people. You can do this on the discord, and by walking up to people in-game. 3. Maybe work on your application and understanding of what it means to be Trusted. It is clear to me that with the amount of effort you put in that you do care, but maybe you just don't know how to say it. In your application, I recommend talking more about how you have contributed and helped out the community, and how the rank of Trusted will help you establish yourself as a more trustworthy source, and how it will help you reach out to even more people. Conclusion: I think you could definitely make Trusted one day, I just currently think you're not fit enough for it just yet. I recommend you take what I said above as constructive criticism and helpful feedback, and use my suggestions to help improve upon yourself to hopefully one day meet the standards of Trusted. I'm going to leave a -1. Personal note: Word count: 1,068 words

You didn't think did you. These are not your words. You stole the paragraphs from @thyking third Trusted application. Disgusting and pathetic, you don't deserve proper feedback (or even a chance at the rank of Trusted) until you write your own words. MASSIVE -1 Link for reference: (https://forums.orbitalservers.gg/threads/thykings-3rd-trusted-app.903/#post-5531)

Holy shit 11/12 of his warns are from this month lmao